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3timer

Some thoughts.

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Allow me to indulge myself for a moment.

I currently only have two stories up on IB.  For some reason both are pretty darn similar.  They both feature a main character that lives alone and has a lot of issues.  These characters suddenly find their lives changed drastically when a young female cub enters the picture and sexual tension rears its head.  

I should sue myself for plagiarism.  

To be perfectly honest, The Line was heavily influenced by AvalOnX's Babysitting Cream.  You might have noticed if you looked closely.  So maybe he should be suing me.  

At any rate, I liked how the game worked.  The characters didn't simply start sleeping together for no reason, there was a build up of trust and friendship.  You know, like real relationships start.

This has always been an issue with me regarding porn.  Nowadays it's just a montage of people having sex, often for no discernible reason.  Its formulaic as well.  It's just the same shit over and over with different faces.  I've always liked emotions with sex, and I like to have an idea of what the characters are thinking and what led them to that moment.  I suppose that's why I find sex scenes in rated R movies more appealing then sex in porn.  There's a reason for it and these are characters that you're emotionally involved with.  

Anyway.  As far as my two stories are concerned.  Inside the Box is designed to move much faster then The Line, so you won't have to wait as long for payoff.  Still, I wanted to give the readers some time to get to know the characters.
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Added: 5 years, 10 months ago
 
FoxonTheFox
5 years, 10 months ago
Yay, and i did notice some similarities between the line and bsc. However not enough to mention it.
VerbMyNoun
5 years, 10 months ago
I didn't notice the similarity between  "The Line" and BSC, but now that you mention it, I can see it. But I wouldn't think that the two are so parallel that you would need to worry about it. Some of the best writings come from being influenced and inspired by other things, and "The Line" has, so far, been amazing. I'm also liking "Inside the Box" a lot, as well. I think the fact that the protagonist is a recluse that doesn't leave his home allows for faster progression of his character. But I wholeheartedly agree about not rushing to the sex - it doesn't happen in the real world, at least not in ways that 2 people would care for each other. It's the same way in writing, if the readers don't have the opportunity to get to know the characters, then it's just sex. It's not slow, passionate lovemaking or wild, unbridled lust. It's just sex. Sex is nice and all, but I like it more when it means something. In my own story, the only sex in Chapter 1 was masturbation, just because he was a single guy at the time with a longtime crush. I'm not planning on writing in any intercourse until Chapter 4, but have plans for other eroticism to give the readers a chance to understand the building passion between the hero and his paramour(s?).

Keep doing what you do, man, the stories are great!
3timer
5 years, 9 months ago
Now that I think about it, Inside the Box was probably influenced by that Ted movie.  Even though I haven't seen it, I've seen the commercial enough times.  The initial concept was supposed to be Pinocchio influenced.  Guy builds sex doll, sex doll magically comes to life.  Then I thought, "Nobody actually makes anything anymore, they buy it online", so I went with that.  Also, the initial concept also had a "last man on earth" thing, but that was a bit too depressing.  The character became agoraphobic instead.  That way I could keep the story more or less confined to the two characters.  
MystBunny
5 years, 10 months ago
I prefer to have to work for sex if it's in a game, otherwise.. well.. it's not really a game, is it. ^_^
3timer
5 years, 9 months ago
A lot of XXX rated games just seem to involve pressing the "next" button.  Not particularly challenging.  

Also it seems the heyday of good flash sex games is over.  BSC is pretty much the last one.
VerbMyNoun
5 years, 9 months ago
Disagree. Corruption of Champions, frequently updated, text based flash sex RPG with a major bend towards non-humans.

Corruption of Champions
3timer
5 years, 9 months ago
Thanks a lot.

There's 10 hours I won't get back.
VerbMyNoun
5 years, 9 months ago
Lol. You like it, I take it? 10 hours in 3 days since I shared the link? The guy actually pays his bills using donations to the site! I'd love to make a living writing porn!
3timer
5 years, 9 months ago
Prolly woulda spent 20 hours if it had images more erotic then the little sprites.  It's fairly addictive and reminds me of Zork or Temple of Apshai, only pornographic.  
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