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EvanSKVRL

Less fappin', more yappin'! XD

It's kind of hard to improve my writing if I don't get any criticism. XB
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Added: 5 years, 10 months ago
 
InfamousMustelid
5 years, 10 months ago
I would give, but i don't read. :(
WhyteYote
5 years, 10 months ago
Your timing, man...I'm just about ready to open up my to-read list, and you're right there on it.  
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sp
5 years, 10 months ago
I'm reluctant to give honest criticism due a couple of people taking it the wrong way.
One person even took to trolling me because I pointed out a flaw, funny how they didn't mind when I was praising their work.
EvanSKVRL
5 years, 10 months ago
It's hard to offend me when I generally hate my own works. XP
sp
sp
5 years, 10 months ago
I value feedback as long as its honest.
If you find a problem please tell me and I'll try and fix it (I stand by that).
Because of such people being honest with me in the past means my work has gotten better.

You could add a comment at the end of every submission saying you want feedback.
squirrelfox
5 years, 10 months ago
I literally have 25 other stories on my "to read" list.  I've sorta been neglecting reading stories on IB in favor of university work.  And Farming Simulator 2013.

Now pardon me while I go harvest the rape... :p
DominusSodoma
5 years, 10 months ago
Can't really type much, hand is cramping from too much fapping.
40ozhyena
5 years, 10 months ago
I've been waiting for it fer awhile. Was so psyched to see it finished.  It belongs on the New York Times Best Seller List. <3
But honestly, I loved it. You changed some of the canon, but you made it work. And work quite well at that. Your elaborations and descriptors used were perrrrrfect for the content. Created some wonderful visuals. I give it 5 out of 5 fap stars. :D
EvanSKVRL
5 years, 10 months ago
*HUFFS* OH, YOU!
lingling
5 years, 10 months ago
"It's kind of hard to improve my writing if I don't get any criticism."
It's kind of hard to criticize writing that doesn't need criticism.

I thought it was perfect. Great job!
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