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Pokemon ballbusting blurbs (free mini-requests)

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UPDATE: I just threw together a forum for furry BB discussion, including RPs: http://furrybb.heroku.com/. Check it out!

Writing update: I'm still working on Laura's story ("The Underground League: Learning the Ropes"), making slow but steady progress. It's probably 75% of the way there, so I'm hoping to post the complete version within the next month or so. As always, I'd love feedback* (there are still some sections I'm not entirely happy with), so check it out!

On a related note: it turns out that writing blurbs about fictional Underground League matches is kind of addicting. I'd actually like to write some more, and I figure this is an opportunity to ask for suggestions and take some mini-requests from anyone who might be interested.

So, here's the deal:
- Name a pair of Pokemon for an Underground League battle
- Add a few more details if you want (names, attacks, characteristics)
- I'll write you a paragraph or two of some poor 'mon getting his balls bashed around
- Make sure to specify which character is which gender! (I'll even do M/M if you want, though I'd greatly prefer F/M.)

Note that I'm gonna write pretty exclusively about (a) sex and (b) ballbusting, and not any other kinks. And while I'm happy to write in a blunt-force pop or two, I'll decline requests for the more bloody and/or surgical parts of CBT (cutting, etc). If you've seen it in one of my stories before, it's fair game; beyond that please be reasonable.

I think that's it! Feel free to leave a request, or to chime in with your own snippets if you'd like – I'd love to see the comments for this post become a Pokemon BB free-for-all :P


* True fact: feedback on furry BB stories is the best thing ever. Where else do you get to discuss a Blaziken blasting a Nidoking's nuts into paste? I mean honestly.
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Added: 6 years ago
 
IsabelleUrsaga
6 years ago
Laura's story is looking really good so far. I can't really think of any way to criticize it, personally.
And as for a request...
Well... What about a really sadistic Female lopunny busting a male Lucario around until he pops, having him beg for mercy the whole way?
poiu
6 years ago
She was a stunner alright – tall and leggy, exactly what he’d always liked in her species. Awesome tits, too. And the type advantage meant that it would be an easy battle – a chance to rub elbows (and other parts, hopefully) before he knocked her out.

Of course, that was before she’d punted his balls into his throat a dozen times. Now he was beginning to wonder how he had ever found a Lopunny’s legs sexy.

Please,” the Lucario gasped, but it was no use: yet another Low Kick came slamming into his groin, his gonads squishing between the female’s toes in an attempt to avoid the brutal impact. The male squealed in agony, twitching on the ground as another wave of nausea exploded forth from his spunkmakers.

The steel-type had long ago stopped trying to counter-attack – now he just tried to curl into the fetal position and protect himself from any more ball-breaking blows. But the Lopunny just grabbed him by the ankles, spread his legs wide, and kept kicking, her breasts bouncing with the force of each hit.

Please–!

“Shut up and take it like a man,” she growled, delivering another kick for emphasis, “while you still can.”

He was already beyond saving. He had to be. And yet it still came as a surprise when it finally happened.

Splut.

The Lucario’s squeal jumped an octave as his right egg burst, its contents utterly scrambled by the female’s kick. The pain in his groin doubled – something he would have thought impossible a moment earlier.

He looked up in time to see the Lopunny grinning, cocking her leg back for another blow.

Thud.

Thud.

Th-splut.
Demesejha
6 years ago
While I'd really prefer M/M on this, its fine if you make the agressor female in this case.

I was hoping for something with a strong willed Dewott, a little on the insulted, pissed off side. Genuine desire to mush the nuts of his(or her) victim, being a Bookish, yet self centered and arrogant Absol. Preferably with some pounding water attacks involved, like a direct Hydro pump flattening them til they rupture sort of thing, or just going in by the paws. It's best if the Absol loses both... if possible. <:3
I go M/M because, 1 its a massive turn on, but 2, much more important is the "victim" having a chance to deal some damage themselves. But F/M is fine too as I said.
poiu
6 years ago
I can do M/M! I wouldn't offer if I wasn't willing. Though I'm not totally certain how to have the Absol retaliate if he's getting nailed with range attacks like Hydro Pump. Maybe Absol went for the balls first and Dewott retaliated (times a zillion)?

Anyway, added to my to-do list (there's a bit of a queue :P). Hopefully tomorrow?

Demesejha
6 years ago
That sounds fantastic! And take your time<3
poiu
5 years, 12 months ago
He’d tried to be reasonable – really, he had. His Absol opponent radiated smugness, but that wasn’t reason enough to hate him. Nor was his refusal to shake hands before the match (even if it was unsportsmanslike). Sucker Punch was a legal move, even to the groin (though it hurt like a motherfucker), and so was Taunt (though, again, following one with the other was rather unsportsmanlike). This was the Underground League, and dirty tactics were a standard part of battle.

No, the Dewott could have looked past all that if the Absol hadn’t literally cock-slapped him while he was down. Now the water-type was seeing red, glaring daggers at his opponent. Not that the Absol seemed to care – the dark-type just watched casually, picking a bit of dirt from one of his claws as the Dewott climbed back to his feet.

“Seriously, this is pathetic.” The disaster Pokemon gave a condescending smile. “Do you want to just give up now? Or would you rather suck me off fi–URK!

A sudden burst of water pushed the male backwards, his arms windmilling as he tried to keep his balance; another burst struck him square in the chest, knocking him on to his back with a thud. The Absol’s groan of pain jumped sharply in pitch as another blast hit home squarely between his legs, his furry sac pounded by a focused Water Gun. The male tried to double up and protect himself, but the Dewott’s foot was already on his chest, pushing him back down to the dirt.

“Will you please,” intoned the Dewott testily, “just shut. up?!

The Absol opened his mouth in response, but any reply was drowned out by the deluge of water that came pounding down on his poor plums, his testicles crushed beneath the full onslaught of a point-blank Hydro Pump. The male seemed frozen for a long moment, every muscle tight with agony – then suddenly he was animated again, writhing in place, head-sickle scratching lines in the dirt. A keening wail issued from the back of his throat, sounding increasingly desperate until his eyes rolled back into his head and he passed out.

Later on the Dewott would admit that yes, he probably could have used a bit less force, and maybe then the Absol would still have a nut to his name. But seriously, what a dick.
Demesejha
5 years, 12 months ago
XD That made my day<3 Thank you.
poiu
5 years, 12 months ago
Welcome! I'm glad you liked :)
Fellarts
6 years ago
I will totally look into all this as soon as the weekend comes around. Anything from you is going to be fun.
poiu
6 years ago
Take your time! I've already built up a backlog of requests...I imagine I'm gonna be writing these blurbs all week :P
Fellarts
6 years ago
Should I be thinking more in the human shaped category for these potential shorts?
poiu
6 years ago
Probably? I'm happy to write either, but humanoid is sort of my default mode, so make sure to specify if you want something else :)
Fellarts
6 years ago
Got it. I wanted to be sure I was in the right frame of mind when pitching ideas. xD
Fellarts
6 years ago
Here's a fun little idea I had.

We'd join in during a match between a male Krookodile and a female Gabite. The battle is nearing its end and the Krookodile is clearly winning. Dealing one final attack his opponent can no longer rise to her feet. Instead of just taking the match he decide to make a show of it for the crowd. He pushes the girl on her back, and then kicks her over, flipping her onto her tummy, taking advantage of her weakened state. He raises her rear, groping and slapping it a few times, making a point to try and humiliate her as she moans and cries out, hotdogging his length between her cheeks and such, not penetrating just yet. However her growing anger and humiliation causes the Gabite to evolve in his hands, the female becoming a busty Garchomp. More importantly however is her strength boost as she quickly knocks the male off and defeats him with one mighty outrage attack. With the male down the crowd begins to chant for the female. Feeling good about the victory, things only get better when the chanting goes from her name, to pop him.

Figuring proper revenge is in order, she gets creative. Returning the favor she decides to make a show of him. I figured she would kick his nuts in a few times, causing him to desperately try and crawl away, unable to stand from nut-pain and a battle worn body. Make him beg. Once this happened she would lift him by his nuts to illustrate the difference in their strength and then she would drag him by them while punching them, pulling him along the borders of the stadium for all to see. Then once she was down, she'd go all in, kicking, squeezing, biting, doing whatever she can.

His left one would give first and he would pass out. Not satisfied she would lift him up by his sides and shake him awake. He would eventually come to and be greeted by the pain from his broken ball. Still trying to grasp what was happening as he flails in nu-pain she'd slam him down while swinging her knee up into his last remaining orb, squishing it flat against her knee, getting to truly feel it's contents squash around the shape of her knee. With that the male would let out a silent scream staring into her eyes. She would whisper something to him before he passes out once again and she lets him fall to the floor and then she'd walk off for the locker rooms.

That's my pitch, always chock full of detail as usual. :D
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