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Er... Hmmmm...

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Funny.

Thought that vaca would clear my head.  It did... sorta... just not for this stuff.  

Always wish I could make a clone of myself so I could do different things at once.  Either that or find a way to get by without having to interrupt my day with work.  

The next part of The Line is really close to done, but I've been having misgivings about where I've taken it.  Some of what happens requires some rewrites of earlier stuff.  Which isn't all bad since I figured I'd have to rewrite it anyway, but something is still off.  Plus, more is happening in this part then I typically like to have happen at once.  It feels rushed to me.  

Ya, I know it doesn't seem rushed to my readers, but the story has had a leisurely pace so far and this one kinda steps it up in my opinion.  

I donno.  Maybe I'll just push through and finish it and let you guys decide.  
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Added: 6 years, 1 month ago
 
umbreon45
6 years, 1 month ago
why not post the rough draft and let some people look it over ? maybe someone can give some constructive criticism on it
3timer
6 years, 1 month ago
I don't really make a rough draft.  I guess, in a sense, everything I've posted of The Line so far IS the rough draft.  I really don't know exactly where I'm going when I start something I just carve out a rough idea in my head as I go along.

My creative writing teacher would be appalled.  

I'm pretty sure the biggest thing that is grinding me is that there is some backtracking.  After I rewrite I can eliminate that, but for now it's there for the benefit of the readers.  
umbreon45
6 years, 1 month ago
ok. i dabbled in writing myself and i know it's hard to try to come up with  stuff without contradicting the rest of the story or sounding corney or redundant.
iFailed
6 years, 1 month ago
as long as you dont have a villan apear, so a previos villan make a comeback, give the main a new power, reject that power after kinda defeating the first villan, that power becomes anew villan the comeback villan joins your side and the power villan is defeated in under 3 hours i think youll be fine

spiderman 3 the ultimate of "why the hell did you have to rush so hard!"
3timer
6 years, 1 month ago
Shoot, I thought you were talking about Dragonball.
FoxonTheFox
6 years, 1 month ago
Hey! As long as your alive and well!
3timer
6 years, 1 month ago
I'm alive at least.

Good gosh!  Fuckin time just keeps slipping from me!

I got to get this other shit done so I can get back to this.  I'm so fuckin bad at multi-tasking.  
FoxonTheFox
6 years, 1 month ago
Have to agree there hahaha
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