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Story Remake

So I decided to finally get around to remaking the first story I ever made and posted. I don't know who had read it, but it is the only story I made that I downright hated. So I completely remade it, and the new version I'm happy with. I like how it is going, none of it feels as forced or what ever as the original version did.

As always, feel free to let me know what you think about it. Meant to post this last night, but forgot to click create Journal
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