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beginning of epilogue

Epilogue

inspired by Dragon Mating Season a fanfic by King Spike Rules

[ ]s are comments and narrative seen at the bottom/top of the panel/page. ( ) means speak
{ } means thoughts

Everypony and Dragon are anthro ponies with hands and feet and ALL THE GIRLS have giant breast

Cover 1:

Rainbow Dash, Applejack, Pinkie Pie and Fluttershy wearing different color see through belly dancer outfits belly dancing

Cover 2:

Twilight, Rarity, Celestia and Luna different color see through belly dancer outfits belly dancing

Page 1:

Panel 1:

Raven inkwell lying on a bed with the female night and day guards on either side of her all of them sleeping and naked

Panel 2:

Sunlight hits Raven’s face as she starts to open her eyes

Panel 3:

Raven sits up and giggles as she sees her lovers sleeping happily

Raven: (thank you again your majesties)

Panel 4:

Raven gives the two each a kiss on the forehead

Page 2:

Panel 1:

Wearing a robe Raven brews some coffee

Panel 2:

Raven walks to the front door holding a cup of coffee and picks up a newspaper from the floor

Panel 3:

Raven holding the paper and coffee see the guards sitting up on the bed

Guards: (morning Raven)

Raven: (morning girls, breakfast is ready)

Panel 4:

The girls walk to Raven and snuggle her

Day Guard: (the past few nights have been amazing)

Night guard: (the mornings have been fun too)

Raven: (yes they were but let’s not tardy. The princesses still need us)

Page 3:

Panel 1:

Raven gently swats their butts with the newspaper

Raven: (go on now get moving, eat and then get dressed)

Guards: (yes ma’am)

Panel 2:

Raven drinks her coffee and begins to read the paper

Raven: (good girls)

Panel 3:

Raven becomes wide-eyed while reading the paper and drinking coffee

Panel 4:

Raven does a spit take

Page 4:

Panel 1:

Raven holding the newspaper that has a picture of Celestia fucking Luna in ass with the strap on and Spike fucking luna at the same time. Only Spike’s hands can be seen in the picture

Raven: (girls, we need to get to their majesties now)

Page 5:

Panel 1:

The royal bedroom with Spike sleeping on the bed

Off screen: (oh spikey wikey)

[meanwhile]

Panel 2:

Spike begins to open his eyes

Spike: (I’m not tied up again, am i)

Off Screen: (haha, no not this time Spike)

Off Screen: (hey, we have a lot work to do today)

Panel 3:

Spike starts to sit up and stretch

Off screen: (but first we need your opinion on something)

Spike: (oh what’s…)

Panel 4:

Spike wide eyed blushing with smoke coming out of his nose

Page 6:

Panel 1:

Twilight, Celestia, Luna, and Rarity doing sexy poses wearing lingerie

Rarity: (I’m thinking of starting a new line of lingerie)

Page 7:

Panel 1:

Applejack, Rainbow Dash, Fluttershy, and Pinkie pie doing sexy poses wearing lingerie

Off screen: (and I want your honest opinion, are these sexy enough)

Page 8:

Panel 1:

Spike on the bed as the girls continue posing

Spike: (did you really want my opinion or are trying to make my aroused)

Twilight: (depends is it working)

Panel 2:

Spike gently grabs Twilight’s hand and pulls her towards the bed

Spike: (you tell me)

Panel 3:

Spike now on top of Twilight as she blushes

Spike: (when haven’t I been aroused when I’ve been with you girls this week)

Twilight: (oh Spike)

Panel 4:

Spike and Twilight are about to kiss when a banging sound comes from the door

From the door: (Princess Celestia, Princess Luna please open up it’s an emergency)

Page 9:

Panel 1:

Twilights pouts as the banging continues and Celestia goes to the door

Twilight: (there better be trouble or else there will be trouble)

Panel 2:

Celestia opens the doors to relieve a panicked Raven

Celestia: (Raven tell me what’s going on)

Raven: (you and Princess Luna are on the front page of the paper)

Panel 3:

Raven holds up and shows Celestia the newspaper

Celestia: (ok but how is that…)

Panel 4:

Celestia blushes and becomes wide eyed as she sees the newspaper

Celestia: (oh pony feathers)
Viewed: 170 times
Added: 1 year, 3 months ago
 
MrCyberwolf
1 year, 3 months ago
Loving what I just read.
csmurphy
1 year, 3 months ago
Ooooooh.... This'll be interesting~...
matriks
1 year, 3 months ago
Yeah looks intreresting to see such picture comics in sexy belly dancer otfits and lingeries
Also gonna be great that there is gonna be page where they wearing sexy wedding lingeries
And hope in the last pages we can see Spike with his wifes and their kids
RawAxis
1 year, 3 months ago
Looking pretty hot, can't wait!

Also I didn't know this was based on a fanfic, that's pretty cool!
MechaTomX
1 year, 3 months ago
In the original story, the epilogue ends with Spike and his harem on the beach, it would be great if that happens here seeing Spike and the girls wearing swimsuits.

And hopefully see him with the CMCs in his harem.
KanbeNamura
1 year, 3 months ago
This is really good Cheftrim. :3 Outside of a few spelling/grammar errors, the story looks very promising. ^o^
cheftrim29
1 year, 3 months ago
Please tell me if you do see errors I often miss them due to auto correct
KanbeNamura
1 year, 2 months ago
You got it. ^_^ Here's the error I spotted -----

Page 8:

Panel 1:

Spike on the bed as the girls continue posing

Spike: (did you really want my opinion or are trying to make my aroused)

Twilight: (depends is it working)

It should be ------

Spike: (did you really want my opinion or are trying to make me aroused?)

Twilight: (depends is it working?)
Hornet57
1 year, 3 months ago
I want to See it too
RainbowSnake
1 year, 2 months ago
Page 2, panel 4; Raven:Yes they were but let's not tardy
I think you're missing "be" between not in tardy
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