Hey, it's me again... I corrected the Ongoing File yesterday and added a few details here and there to make it more likely (in the possible range... It's still about furry characters...) like the fact that Andrew is holding a pillow while sleeping (it's then more logical that he tightens his arms...) and I did a major grammar-nazi chase. The problem is that I usually continue the story quite late in the day (because I have other stuff to do during the day); but this time, I started the correction earlier and I even saw sentences that didn't make sense. Anyway, for the ones who were horrified by all this bad spelling and grammar, I did my best (even though I finished quite late so I maybe missed some, especially at the end). I'm still trying to work out for FtD but I just can't seem to find inspiration anymore... Oh well! It will come back eventually.
6 years ago
20 Jul 2012 14:13 CEST