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Whitehair

Emotionally Compromised

Today I finally edited and published Chapter 13 of Yergi's Punishment.  As I wrote in the descriptin box:
" "This particular chapter was difficult for all of us to write as we each incorporated some of our own personal fears and/or nightmares into the story.  Even now, months after originally writing it, I found myself emotionally compromised after editing it."


WARNING: potential spoilers ahead if you are reading Yergi's Punishment and have not yet read Chapter 13.

One of the hardest parts for me was Ristin's nightmare about loosing his mate by giving himself over to me.  IRL, I am very deeply in love with Ristin (as well as his IRL mate) and I would give practically anything to have them here with the three of us.

Another difficult section was Alynna's nightmare.  I specifically tried to write my character as cruel, hearless, and vile as I could.  Reading it over made me feel so bad for all the bad things I have ever said to people IRL.  I do have a cutting tongue when I am upset and ahve said many things that I would take back if I could.  {Queue up "If I Could Turn Back Time" and "Enjoy the Silence"}

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Added: 6 years, 1 month ago
 
FoxxyFluff
6 years, 1 month ago
Awws *Offers hugs* Normal even the hardest stories don't phase me but this chapter was even difficult for me to read.
Whitehair
6 years, 1 month ago
Thanks for the hugs.  I hope that it was still an interesting read, even if emotionally difficult.
FoxxyFluff
6 years, 1 month ago
It was, I'm glad it was all dreams *Shivers*
Whitehair
6 years, 1 month ago
Honestly, so I am... though Yergi's section is relatively accurate to how he killed and/or mutilated the 8 furs that were described from the "chorus of judgement".  It did leave out the fact that he had raped every one of them before he did the other things to them.  His crimes had to truly be horrible for the courts to order the punishment that they did.

SNEAK PREVIEW (highlight to see): the badger boy he didn't kill makes his first non-dream appearance in Chapter 18.  :)
FoxxyFluff
6 years, 1 month ago
*Nods* I can't wait to read more. Oh if you need an extra I have a pretty messed up character :P
Whitehair
6 years, 1 month ago
Thank you.  Very kind.  <blush>
FoxxyFluff
6 years, 1 month ago
"Blushes a lot"
Stumpycoon
6 years, 1 month ago
I have trouble with it too, it is challenging.
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