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Kaheiyattsu

Regarding my game

I got the basics down now I just need alittle imput from you the potential players.

Which of my main characters stories would you want to see done?

THE STORIES AREN'T INVOLVED WITH EACHOTHER THEY ARE EACH THEIR OWN INDIVIDUAL STORY!

There's Paul my blue otter you are probably familiar with. The story he's in takes place in a bleak futuristic setting, where only the people with power and money have a say in how the world works. Without spoiling it I will say that him along with his 7 allies seek to put a stop to the absolutes control and order that the main villian seeks to control, the very elements that make up the world they live. Paul and the others represent each one and the power to maintain balance and order in those elements lies on thier shoulders. The main villian seeks their power to use to have a compleat grip on the world itself.

Or my fox boy Kahei's story who's story.....well his story isn't as finished as Paul and thems story. But I can say that kaheis known world is in war and an event takes place causes young kahei to seek out the other 7 at his fathers wish.  Upon meeting the others young kahei and the rest must stop the element that has fallen greatly out of balance due to a previous guardians neglect of his or her duty to keep it in balance. That's about what I have right now i'm still writing it.

So which one should I go with first?
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Added: 6 years, 6 months ago
 
JTPF
6 years, 6 months ago
So it's the same story told by two different guys?! Nice!
Kaheiyattsu
6 years, 6 months ago
Well no it's two compleatly different stories that are pretty unrelated.
JTPF
6 years, 6 months ago
That would be so awesome.... Maybe i'll do that one day ^-^
ArenSari
6 years, 6 months ago
kahei's sounds cool :3

but I might just be partial to foxes   ^w^
iceman97
6 years, 6 months ago
same here
Kaheiyattsu
6 years, 6 months ago
I want people to want it for the story not the species involved, plus there are foxes involved in both stories the main characters aren't he only ones.
ArenSari
6 years, 6 months ago
I was just kidding around  :3   in truth both sound very interesting ^w^ I'll prolly be able to decide better once Kahei's story is more developed..  for comparison reasons :3
gaki
6 years, 6 months ago
both sound really good :3 dunno which one to chose ^^;;
XValentine
6 years, 6 months ago
You don't choose.  You give multiple perspectives in an effort to give depth, detail, and thought into the story.  Focusing on only one main character is a sure-fire way to make a two-dimensional or "flat" story, and trust me- you don't want that.
Kaheiyattsu
6 years, 6 months ago
It's two different stories that are pretty much un related, the two characters themselvs though residing within the same world do not reside in the same timeline. Kahei's story takes place several generations after pauls. Just to clarify the story doesn't focus on one character rather around about 8 individuals with eir own quirks personalities and problems.

I'm just saying each story starts out with the two characters mentioned first meeting the others along the way. but I refer to the tories as "thiers" since they are the ones that start them but the stories are compleatly separate events which is why I can't decide which one to go with since i love all my characters and both stories.
XValentine
6 years, 6 months ago
You are the champion of run-on sentences.  Also, I'm sure you can find a way to tie them together.  If you try to reserve things for one story or the other, you end up holding out and are left with something that doesn't quite feel complete
Kaheiyattsu
6 years, 6 months ago
Thing is i want them to have as little to do with eachother as possible possibly severing all ties they have with eachother already.

They are two compleatly separate stories that I don't want to be combined I just want to know which my fans would like to see first.
XValentine
6 years, 6 months ago
Perhaps you should write for yourself.
Kairu1
6 years, 6 months ago
I say the second one :D
Kaheiyattsu
6 years, 6 months ago
may I ask why you want to see that one instead of the other?
Kairu1
6 years, 6 months ago
Because I feel one where war is already underway is easier to address things of why people might join him rather than just because their society sucks because rich people control everything, I personally just feel it'd be easier to understand how the characters are acting and relate to their reasons for doing what they do.
Kaheiyattsu
6 years, 6 months ago
Well actually Kahei and them don't relly ever get involved in the war at all, in fact the reason kahei recives his blessing is because his father gives it to him because his father is the one fighting in the war and has no time to keep his element in balance. The war doesn't conflict with the story much accept a few parts, it is handled mostly offscreen.
Gamefox
6 years, 6 months ago
I like the fox character more.
Kaheiyattsu
6 years, 6 months ago
the stroy isn't about just that character  there are many others in each story.
Gamefox
6 years, 6 months ago
That's obvious. I was asked to tell you which character I would like to see the story of, so I picked the fox over the otter. I didn't read anything specific about any other side characters in the info other than the seven followers. And that's all it says. I'd love to know the differences between the two groups, especially if you think it would make a difference in my choice. Hope everything turns out well.
kitsunema
6 years, 6 months ago
ild say the second one and if you need help i can contribute to helping you write
HannibalAzul
6 years, 6 months ago
OTTERrrr
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