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Moonlight555

TONY DA LION ~~ Need my *few* readers input

Hey there. Just wanted peoples input on the next chapter of Tony da Lion. See, I know how this site is about 99.9% sex and 0.1% no sex. I also know that Tony da Lion started out as more of a yiff oriented novel than anything else. Since then it has grown into something else.

Here's where I would like your input. Should there be more sex? Well, there's gonna be sex. But, should I describe it as something to make boys drool in two places, or should I describe it just enough so you get the idea behind what it means and the emotions that go with it?

I am in the middle, trying to decide between pleasing people, and making the story something I could bring home to show the folks. (Figuratively of course.)



So, what do you think? Any input is greatly appreciated.
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Added: 6 years, 4 months ago
 
saintkoopa
6 years, 4 months ago
Um as someone who has been following the series for a while now I say the sex is just an addition. The story is amazing. great plotline and good character development. It would be best that you continue on the present course. The sex is good but the plotline should first priority. I khave the same problem with one of my series. It started as a yiff story now it is has a heavy plotline. Sex sells but plotline gets people to continue to read.
Moonlight555
6 years, 4 months ago
Thank you very much. You raise some pretty good points. It's those reasons why I didn't want to put too much sex in now. As you said, sex sells. And it keeps on selling. If I wrote up a really great sex scene, I'd probably get a good number of faves, and a couple watches. But those watches won't matter much if they only read the story for the sex.

Looks like the vote is unanimous (even though there's only you and Akavar that replied to the journal). I'll put less focus on the sex. In fact, this decision might work out nicely in the next chapter.... *Starts jotting down ideas.*

Thanks again. ^.^
saintkoopa
6 years, 4 months ago
no problem. Balance is key to making a great story. waiting to read the next chapter.
Akavar
6 years, 4 months ago
it feels like you got the yiff done and out of the way for my opinion im enjoying the direction the story is heading now and would like to see how it turns out in the in
Moonlight555
6 years, 4 months ago
I'm glad you like it. So far the vote has been unanimous, so I'll take less focus off the sex. (Which might just give me an advantage in the plotline and overall story telling of it.)

Thanks for your opinion on this. ^.^
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