What could I be doing better?

Okay, so I've been feeling that I may need to work on something specific when it comes to my art. I know I have improved immensely, but I'd like some outside opinions in order to improve further.

So what could I be doing better? What is my art lacking?

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Added:	4 years, 11 months ago 16 May 2019 05:11 CEST

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AnimeKidForever21

4 years, 11 months ago

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I'll admit I can't think of anything. I think it all looks good. Well, I did want to maybe suggest one or two things in mind but I think you should know that if you dislike any of the suggestions, than you don't have to do them. Sounds fair?

Thrashmael

4 years, 11 months ago

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@ AnimeKidForever21

Lets hear em

AnimeKidForever21

4 years, 11 months ago

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@ Thrashmael

Okay. One, if you want to, you can try some new characters that peak your interest, some of them may vary here and there. Two, maybe some of the characters could have really huge tongues and lips like how they show them in cartoons but it's optional.

Norithics

4 years, 11 months ago

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The last time you asked, we talked about depth and fat, and you've definitely taken strides in that direction!
Now, I think it's time to double down on lines. Line weight, line consistency, that kind of thing. I think focusing on making your shapes more consistent would be a good route to go down, specifically by practicing your Long Stroke. Short strokes are good for the skeletal phase, but when it comes time to actually line the drawing, you want that line to be as consistent as possible so the shape comes out the way you want.

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