So after the bit of attention that the Twine story got, I'm going to continue working on it. Actually have spent a few hours the past few days on it.
Leave some comments below if there's anything in particular you'd like to see in it. But a run-down on what's coming so far:
Toys w/ Zack!
More endings! Including a bad one or two.
Secret paths that will require certain choices to unlock. No cheating!
New guests! (Including finishing the Roy/Mitch path.)