A question for readers of Country Summer

I'm thinking that I will wrap up “Country Summer” in another 3 chapters or so. I know what I want to do in the final chapter, but I'm haven’t yet decided what the penultimate chapters should include.

So I thought I'd ask y'all for suggestions. Is there anything you'd especially like to see happen in this story before it ends?

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Upsilonu51

5 years, 2 months ago

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Sorry, I only recently rediscovered this site and content. Good work by the way. You're an excellent writer.

Anyway, I'd love to see maybe a spitroast or some other kinda three way action. M/F/M, M/M/F. Something along those lines Really just about anything would be interesting. (Sudden thought) Maybe you could get the aunt involved in some of their antics. That could prove interesting. (Another random thought. Thank god for edit) Maybe have them do something in the fields and get caught?

Do you know a comic artist, 'cause I'd love to have maybe a condensed version of this in picture form? Or just some still images.
If you don't it's not a big deal. You make the images with just your words. Like I said. You're an excellent writer.

GeorgeGlass

5 years, 1 month ago

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@ Upsilonu51

Hey, thanks for the suggestions (and the praise).

There will definitely be some more three-way action. Been ambivalent about involving Aunt Maisy; still thinking about that.

As for "getting caught," the kids aren't actually forbidden to have sex. It's just considered rude to be obvious about it.

Upsilonu51

5 years, 1 month ago

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I don't know if you're still checking this, but like the pervert I am, I had a few ideas.
And by "caught" I mostly meant something like maybe some dense person with some rather draconian social views (I'm sure there's at least one).
Anyway, maybe a flashback story to the kid's first time when they were just kinda "feeling things out" for the lack of a better phrase. I also thought that maybe somehow adding a more matured woman to...uh...teach them a few new things could be interesting. A good double knotting might be cool too (and likely a bit on the painful side, but like I said, I'm a perv).
Or maybe have them teach some younger relatives (or friends I guess) a few things themselves. Oh, doesn't Bobby Joe have a sister? Just saying. :)

GeorgeGlass

5 years, 1 month ago

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@ Upsilonu51

Thanks for the ideas. I think I've pretty much got the last 3 chapters figured out now. Here are the titles:
Chapter 9: Franny's Birthday, Part 1
Chapter 10: Franny's Birthday, Part 2
Chapter 11: Under the Stars

Upsilonu51

5 years, 1 month ago

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@ GeorgeGlass

Glad to be of help. If you ever need an idea, I come up with a few good ones every once in a while. Unfortunately, I'm not so great when I try to put them to paper, but you are.
Anyway, can't wait for the new chapters, and I look forward to your works in the future.

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