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GrayAutumn

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If u were going to read a story would this grab your attention

This is part of a story I'm doing...it has manny religious influences.

" who am I... humhaaaha. I am the antagonist divine, I am your suffering your fears, the crys heard at the end of time. I am the blood that stains the face of man. Once I was lucifer, once I was sataan. But now...I am the beast. Cast your heart unto me, and I shall spare you."
      
     "   No... our hearts...our souls shall never be yours,  although we walk through the valley of the shadow of death... we shall FEAR! NO! EVIL! FOR HE IS WITH US!" Torin shouted in the voice of many as he griped the holy spear hard and readyed himself for the final showdown.
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Added: 6 years, 8 months ago
 
Blacktiger
6 years, 8 months ago
"Sure for example i love the warhammer 40k books and the space marines are crasy with their religion! That part wouldn't scare me off. I like those over the top religious talk^^ i'm not the beliver type so extrem religous stuff amuses me hehe."
Cloud006
6 years, 8 months ago
to me yes it would and does.

I love the religionish feel and over tones.
just form this i'm hooked.
please say there is more.
GrayAutumn
6 years, 8 months ago
Ya there should be more but I don't think ill post it here doesn't seem to be popular
Cloud006
6 years, 8 months ago
well it is one of thos stories that is hit or miss.
GrayAutumn
6 years, 8 months ago
ya true well im gunna upload it here anyway but i fell like it might get removed
Cloud006
6 years, 8 months ago
what make you say that??
GrayAutumn
6 years, 8 months ago
Because its not furry art. And it wont be very popular I thinl I.posted it an hr ago and it had 0 views
Cloud006
6 years, 8 months ago
well right now it has 9 views.
And I'll read it as soon as I can.
Meowz
6 years, 8 months ago
Gotta admit I'm not hooked with religion spiritualities.
torchlight
6 years, 8 months ago
Not my taste, but it is well written.
crescentfang
6 years, 8 months ago
It does have my attention, but I think that kind of dialogue is already well used XD but the events that lead up to it and the events that follow spark my imagination and interest.
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