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konza

Ameagari no Hanaby is now available in English

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Hello everyone.
As you know, I made a 2D action game for Japanese, then it has been fully-localized to English yesterday.

My dear friend who is a native English speaker has proofread the English texts written by a man whose latest TOEIC score is 355. As the proofreading was very nice, some texts of the English version seem be better than the Japanese version.

Please visit the store page and try out the demo version!

https://store.steampowered.com/app/888990/
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Added: 9 months ago
 
Eyes
9 months ago
nice, anything adult only in it?
konza
9 months ago
Thanks.
It contains like adult jokes (not sexual expression with characters)
nov
nov
9 months ago
No offense, but a "native English speaker" with a TOEIC score of 355 is not that high, considering the range is 10-990.

Did they complete the Listening and Reading or Writing and Speaking or only one part of the test to get the aggregate score? It concerns me that you might want an additional english-speaker to proofread the proofread parts for it to be more clear and avoid "engrish" in your product.

If its just one part of the score than their total then that's one thing.
konza
9 months ago
Well, was the sentence of my journal bad?
That score is mine, not my friend's ....
nov
nov
9 months ago
It got a bit muddied with "a man whose score.." felt referenced to the friend, not you. Thank you for the clarification, konza!
konza
9 months ago
I'm sorry I made you confused because of my nonsense!
dahan
9 months ago
I thought the sentence was clear, and didn't have any trouble understanding what you meant :)
konza
9 months ago
Thank you for your gentleness!
dahan
9 months ago
The native English speaker isn't the person who took the TOEIC. (Is there even any reason for a native speaker to take that test?)
nov
nov
9 months ago
Well obviously to prove your english competency to someone who isn't as literate as you in english. Allows trust for professionals in sense to someone non-english speaking. The wording implied that the person that took the test was the proofreader, not konza.
SenGrisane
9 months ago
Wow. Looks really nice.
konza
9 months ago
Thank you very much!
y1
y1
9 months ago
Looks cute! I'll keep it on my wishlist, might check it out one day if I have the cash to spare.
konza
9 months ago
Thank you very much!
sneff
9 months ago
Awesome. The demo was fun but not being able to understand what was being said held me back from getting the full version.
konza
9 months ago
Thank you for playing the demo!
The story on the demo may be not good because the demo is a patchwork.
sneff
9 months ago
Oh I wasnt able to read the text in the demo well other than some of the ui so hearing that its now all in english I will be able to read it
Killereye
9 months ago
The pink area with the cloud-bunnies...clever! Gotta be my favorite stage with all those "buzzing obstacles" to avoid...tho' I wouldn't try to avoid any of those! ♥ ♥
Lehan
8 months, 2 weeks ago
Coincidentally, I played the demo just yesterday, and I knew I recognized the art style! I will definitely buy it when I have some spare money.
konza
8 months, 2 weeks ago
Oh, thank you very much!
Arcticwolf998
1 month, 1 week ago
It would be awesome if someday you implemented an adult(18+) addon I have the game and beat it a few times. I think its an amazing game already honestly! But the addon would make for an interesting adventure for sure, unless you have something else in the works already and haven't mentioned it?
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