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SixUnderscore

Feedback Would Really Be Appreciated

Finally done with college, had to struggle through the semester to pass, but it's done, and following some technical issues, I should be getting my degree relatively soon. Woot.

Managed to post that Gumball story-trade thing of mine recently. I'm hoping you all enjoyed it; the reason I say I hope is because I don't know for sure. Which brings me to the main point of this blog post:

I could really use a little more verbal feedback from you guys on the stuff I publish. I know a majority of readers just want to get a quick fap and move on with their night, and I can't help that there are people like that. But here's the thing: I'm not asking for any payment on these stories, I'm doing it for free, not only to give you guys something to enjoy, but also to hone my own writing skills. Yes, even though I'm writing stories focused on scat with this account, I still do take my writing somewhat seriously and want to get better at this skill. It's hard for me to do that if I'm not getting feedback from the people following me, and if I keep uploading stories only to get crickets in the comments section, then it makes it hard for me to feel motivated to keep publishing stuff at all.

I'm not asking for an essay from each person; just a quick sentence about what you liked, what you disliked, stuff you'd like to see me write more or better in the future, whatever. I've got more than 70 people following me, which isn't a lot, but if even half of those people were to leave a sentence in the comments about the story, that'd probably amount to a page worth of feedback that I can use to make better stories. I don't think I'm asking for an arm and a leg when I'm asking for people to take 30 seconds out of their night to type out their thoughts on what they just read... am I?

Anyway, while searching for a job to keep my head above water, I'll be starting a story about Gazelle pretty soon. Looking forward to hearing some feedback on that when it's published in a few months.
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Added: 5 years, 10 months ago
 
isthatme
5 years, 10 months ago
You have done pretty good in story writing overall, its just im not into your more recent incest and whatnot fanfiction. I do love a good bit of desperation, but maybe in their pants next time rather than jusg everywhere.
Waru
5 years, 10 months ago
Well, a lot of the story FELT, dialog-wise like it belonged in the Gumball universe. Nothing felt OOC (even WITH the fetishes in it).
furrball01
5 years, 10 months ago
keep up the good work and i liked your stories A Steaming Load of Affection and Relieving Inhibitions
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