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Snofu

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Seriously. Please comment more on my stuff, tell me what you like and what you don't like about what I drew. I will love you forever, it helps me improoving, it helps me drawing more stuff you like. And I know you want the stuff you like. I know it okay.
Also I feel like if it was summer right now. Guess it's time for summer themed porn? Fruity clothes and hot beach porn~ Yaay

Still love you all.
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Added: 6 years, 5 months ago
 
kitaness
6 years, 5 months ago
Your stuff is pretty cute but honestly I would look at it more if you used more distinctive custom thumbnails for each image. As it is if someone has custom thumbnails on your whole gallery just looks like a bunch of pink squares with red writing on them. There's nothing to lead me into clicking on a picture.
You could still keep smaller warning text overlaid onto the thumbnails if you really wanted to, but I honestly don't think even that is necessary as long as you properly tag all submissions.
Snofu
6 years, 5 months ago
Thanks a lot! Will keep in mind next time I upload something.
Tycloud
6 years, 5 months ago
Ill comment if you comment.
JTPF
6 years, 5 months ago
I don't know, i like the way you draw.. ^-^
DrakeGrey
6 years, 5 months ago
I've only recently started watching you, but I do have two recommendations- First I think you could give the characters slightly longer feet to make them look more natural, and second I think you could benefit from trying out some new poses and viewpoints.  Everything else seems to me like a very comfortable fit with your style.
Snofu
6 years, 5 months ago
Thank you so much~ I actually try the different view point a lot, most of the time it doesn't work. Sometimes when I think it worked noone else can see it- XD Need to practise a lot on that.
DrakeGrey
6 years, 5 months ago
Well for that I'd say a good set of framework markers can help, I just earlier today uploaded a couple things to FA that should help-

https://www.furaffinity.net/view/7474574/

https://www.furaffinity.net/view/7474600/

Presuming you have an FA account like most artists here seem to, I'd mention that you would need to be logged in to view them.
Snofu
6 years, 5 months ago
Neat! That helps. Thanks :)
DrakeGrey
6 years, 5 months ago
Glad I could be of assistance -tips hat-
danielwd
6 years, 5 months ago
I really like your fingers and whilst longer feet would make them look more natural, I really like the stumpy thing you do. I also really like how you blended fur colour on "Dog" https://inkbunny.net/submissionview.php?id=188846

How's that for comment.
Snofu
6 years, 5 months ago
Hah, Thank you! Allways nice to hear that someone like the stuff I draw c:
DonutGalaxy
6 years, 5 months ago
Um...the noses could be more animalistic. x3 I mean..they kinda look round,like a rabbit's would be. If that makes any sense. o3o
Snofu
6 years, 5 months ago
What rabbits do have noses.. o3o;
Heh XD Yeah, will try c:
DonutGalaxy
6 years, 5 months ago
Either way no matter what I'll still love your art! ~huggles~ OuO
Jader
6 years, 5 months ago
In my case I commented very little to other artists for the problem of language ... I only speak Spanish D:, could hardly translate exactly what I really mean ... what limits me to phrases like "Awesome", "Very cute", "Great work" ... and really that don't would help you what you want ... a more objective point of view ^.^... anyway ... hopefully increase the number of comments... but remember... the best comment is that you do yourself... greetings ~^ o ^~
Snofu
6 years, 5 months ago
Well, as you can tell by my comments.. my english sucks bad and I need hours to translate stuffs XD And my vocabulary is limited to diffrent variations of saying thank you.
Thanks. c:
Jader
6 years, 5 months ago
Woowowowowo ... yap ... I just read your profile ... you live in Austria and his native language is German * ^. ^ * ... so also it takes hours to translate into English X3 ... at this stage of technology, the web should automatically translate both voice and text to the language you prefer as a reader or listener, to perfection and free <.<... that would facilitate conversation much experience with different people around the world u.u ..
Snofu
6 years, 5 months ago
Haha, yeah! Something like google translator, only properly and good to understand XD
xichan
6 years, 5 months ago
Okay, I know much of what I'm going to comment on may be stylistic preferences, so feel free to disreguard any points I make that are deliberately stylistic on your part.

First, the good:

I love your grasp of naughty anatomy, your shading(when you choose to use is) is gorgeous, both artsty, and yet still a good representation of the shape of the subject. You have a very firm grasp of pinup - or you may just be one of those artists who uses it instinctively. Regardless, keep that up please!

The bad:

Drakegrey is right about your feet. They look too stumpy. If you want a stumpy foot look, cut them out entirely as you did with <3. Then it's obvious it's intentional and looks real cute.
Your eyes seem a bit flat, especially compared to the rest of your gorgeous shading. I'm pretty sure the issue is the cornea. You make them one single flat color. Try using a darker color then you want  the eye color to be, then shade a ring of lighter color then you want the eye to be down the middle. I think that will greatly enhance the depth of your eyes. You could also try doing a shading of a darker color in the middle of your pupils. I'm not sure if that would work well with your style, but it probably would.

Now that I've critically deconstructed your work, please please PLEASE don't be discouraged. Everyone has something they need to work on, and what I said was meant to be constructive, not discouraging. I like your work - I wouldn't watch if I did not, so keep up the excellent artings!

Snofu
6 years, 5 months ago
At first I was like: Oh my god, whys the bad one so long?
But it acutaly really helped me, I'll try to make the eyes better the next time and shade them.  Thanks a lot!
xichan
6 years, 5 months ago
Don't get me wrong, your eyes are not bad! They just look a little flat, especially when you use really nice shading on the rest of the character, and you did ask for stuff that would help you improve. I think that deeper eyes could really help your art.

If you'd like a quick example of eye shading, I scrapped one together using a style for eyes similar to yours. Not as nicely drawn or polished as yours, but this was just supposed to be an example.

https://inkbunny.net/submissionview.php?id=210998
Snofu
6 years, 5 months ago
Don't worry I didn't get it wrong c:
And thanks for the example! Will totaly try this out!
xichan
6 years, 5 months ago
You bet! I look forward to seeing the results when you use it!
Shokuji
6 years, 5 months ago
I'm super behind on my submissions (3k now), but that's because I like to comment and such on things (not just look/fav).
Sigma
6 years, 5 months ago
*Takes note of this*
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