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yiharbin

Voting time again

For my novel that I had you guys vote on last time.....
I have chapter one and chapter two done here: https://inkbunny.net/submissionsviewall.php?rid=36d63a4...

now.... I would like you guys to vote on a few things for the chapter I am currently working on, which is in Danny's perspective.

1) in gym class
a, he gets hit in the face playing billy ball (which is like free for all dodge ball)
b, Danny accidentally hits Nick in the face with a ball, playing billy ball

2) inbetween classes
a, he gets shoved into the lockers by one of nick's 'friends'
b, nothing happens yet and everything is still somewhat normal

3) walking home
a, an embarrassing song to be caught singing comes up on his ipod and he sings it a little too hapily and loudly (you must suggest a song)
b, he gets ambushed by one of his over hyper and affectionate female friends who wants to talk
c, people yell obscenities at him as they drive by (suggest obscenity)

4) when he gets home
a, his mom wants to have mother/son time after getting new school supplies
b, Danny just kinda chillaxes like the day before

5) What CD does he listen to as he goes to sleep today
-open ended-

just comment here so i can collect the polls more easily

THANKS GUYS AND GALS!!!!!!!!!
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Added: 6 years, 6 months ago
 
Cloud006
6 years, 6 months ago
1) in gym class
b, Danny accidentally hits Nick in the face with a ball, playing billy ball

2) inbetween classes
a, he gets shoved into the lockers by one of nick's 'friends'

3) walking home
b, he gets ambushed by one of his over hyper and affectionate female friends who wants to talk

4) when he gets home
a, his mom wants to have mother/son time after getting new school supplies

5) What CD does he listen to as he goes to sleep today
A mix CD of all his Favorite songs.
yiharbin
6 years, 6 months ago
haha, I like it!
thank you! ^^
Cloud006
6 years, 6 months ago
Thanks.

and your welcome.
yiharbin
6 years, 6 months ago
you like things a little more dramatic, eh?
Cloud006
6 years, 6 months ago
Well given the choices I picked the ones that sounded best.
 it does not have to be all drama.

the girl could just want to talk about normal stuff and the same for his mom.
yiharbin
6 years, 6 months ago
I am just making an observation ^^;

HolyLaxativeApples seems to be more into comedy based on what they chose

just observations. I am more or less making a secret census of what is more popular. you seem to be drawn to things thats are more dramatic, they are drawn to comedy. I want to figure out what is more pleasing in general to make the book more pleasing to people.
Cloud006
6 years, 6 months ago
What did I sound up set??
did not mean to.

Tho I have to say I lol hard when I read what song he picked.
he did seem to like the funnier side.

As for me I pick what would most likely happen to me on a day like that.
yiharbin
6 years, 6 months ago
you did sound a little upset

lol, same!

yeah, i know. just observing
Cloud006
6 years, 6 months ago
ok.
HolyLaxativeApples
6 years, 6 months ago
1) in gym class
a, he gets hit in the face playing billy ball (which is like free for all dodge ball)

2) inbetwwen classes
b, nothing happens yet and everything is still somewhat normal

3) walking home
a, an embarrassing song to be caught singing comes up on his ipod and he sings it a little too happily and loudly "Barbie Girl"

4) when he got home
a, his mom wants to have mother/son time after getting new school supplies

5) What CD does he listen to as he goes to sleep today
Blood on the dance floor
yiharbin
6 years, 6 months ago
heh, liking the choices
your more into comedy, eh?
HolyLaxativeApples
6 years, 6 months ago
yeah. X3
Halo
6 years, 6 months ago
1) in gym class
a, he gets hit in the face playing billy ball (which is like free for all dodge ball)
i think this would get nick get a bigger "gotta care for him feeling"

2) inbetween classes
a, he gets shoved into the lockers by one of nick's 'friends'

3) walking home
a, an embarrassing song to be caught singing comes up on his ipod and he sings it a little too hapily and loudly (I will always love you-Whitney Houston(wich found in there out of the blue a while ago?))

4) when he gets home
a, his mom wants to have mother/son time after getting new school supplies
Would create more space to get indept on the mom and relationship i suppose

5) What CD does he listen to as he goes to sleep today
One given to him by his mom during supply shopping? Owl city - Ocean eyes or one from his collection (like one with metallica's enter sandman to be ironic or something)
yiharbin
6 years, 6 months ago
lol, love it!
Halo
6 years, 6 months ago
glad you like it ^w^
quickninja12
6 years, 6 months ago
1. b
2. a
3. a- song- "The Irony of Dying on Your Birthday"- Senses Fail
4. b
5. "Jihad" or "Infidel" both by Otep, perhaps given to him by Nick or someone precious to him.

I had nothing better to suggest than emo music (there is no such word as 'emo' its genre is actually called post hardcore) but Otep is hardcore/poetic metal. just suggestions and personal faves.
yiharbin
6 years, 6 months ago
interesting selection, hehe ^^
DannyDenim
6 years, 6 months ago
Hmmm. I think I wanna say:
A
A
B
B
and a sonic the hedgehog remix CD lol
yiharbin
6 years, 6 months ago
lol, may not do the sonic CD
XD


thank you a bazillion for the votes though! ^^
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