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TaylinSora

Athesia: heroes in the stars! an original story by Taylin Sora

I've finally made the rough draft of my story visible for EVERYONE (except guests), feel free to view it, you can read up and discuss any of the following as well as anything that comes to mind. As well, discuss among yourselves about the story if you like all critique will help in development of the story greatly! the more the better ^^

((bear in mind i can write much in a short period of time, but i do make mistakes grammatically wise, and thus i'd appreciate a dedicated editor, and artistic partner once I've finished this first book, one of many in the series))



+questions
                                                                          
+what you liked

+what you disliked

+who was your favorite character

+a character isn't developed or presented in a way you though believable or in a way you like

+what you hope to see

+what could be done to improve on the story

+was the beginning good enough or presented in a way you enjoyed?
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