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KichigaiKitsune

Story Updates

Have just replaced Tai's Story (the full version), with several errors corrected. Currently updating the chapters of Astray to match the versions on SoFurry, and because I have acted on the advice of a "critic."

You know, I still consider Tai's Story to be finished, but the fact is... I need to either seriously set things aside, sit down and edit thoroughly until I'm happy, or I need another pair of eyes who'll work with me to edit.

Self-editing is terrible. Not only is it hard, but you get nowhere; you miss obvious errors and are reluctant to take a scythe to your own work.

I've been trying to keep my prose a little more concise lately, but I still have these two novels (well, one and three-quarters) that I need to sit down and bring up to standard.

Astray's first chapter has been reuploaded and I even let it "alert" my watchers - I received feedback on this chapter particularly, pointing out that I could shorten it a little. I've done so, and improved it a little. Feel free to take a look and tell me what you think.

Oh, and Starling, if you read this: the whole "will only auto-fill once" thing is very troublesome. Is there any reason why it can't auto-fill the preview window when the story has been reuploaded? It wouldn't be a problem if we could copy-paste the new document in, but it's allergic to paragraphing, apparently - we don't get the spacing between paragraphs that we did when it auto-filled.
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Added: 6 years, 10 months ago
 
redfox44
6 years, 10 months ago
Tai's story is several pages shorter now, according to my Microsoft Word. Is that just a formatting thing?
KichigaiKitsune
6 years, 10 months ago
It's just a formatting change. I narrowed the margins a bit, fitting more onto a page. :3
Shibumi
6 years, 10 months ago
Your stories were brought to my attention by a friend on FM. I just wanted you to know that I really appreciate your writing. Keep up the awwwsome work!
KichigaiKitsune
6 years, 10 months ago
Thanks!

Uh, but, what's FM? *derp*
Shibumi
6 years, 10 months ago
Teehee!
FurryMUCK
:3
KichigaiKitsune
6 years, 10 months ago
Oh, duh! *baps self* I GOTTA ask now: do I know the person who recommended me? :3
Shibumi
6 years, 10 months ago
I think he said you two were friends :3
I don't remember exactly who recommended your work to me though.
(Could have been Kitsune, could have been Mizu, could have been Chien'D'Arren'D'Or)
I don't remember :3
(Heck, it could have been someone completely different than the ones I listed :3)
KichigaiKitsune
6 years, 10 months ago
Prooobably was Mizu. :3

Anyway, glad to have you watching and hope you enjoy the stories!
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