I need some help figuring out some stuff. Recently someone told me my stories are too long and that he wouldn't read them because of that. He is a good freind of mine who also writes fanfictions and stories. I think he may have a point since most of my chapters are suppose to be split into 3 parts.
also now that i am working on chapter 9 i realize that my original plan for my story has basically become obsolete. A few examples of this were that Tony was not suppose to be introduced until chapter 15 or so. Dale was suppose to appear in chapter 11 and Ben should have started school in chapter 5. Once iI finish off what I started in chapter 7 and 8 I can finally get down to what the bulk of the rest of the story is going to be. The members dealing with thier everyday lives which means sibling fighting, romance and freindship trouble.
second note I have noticed i lack explanations for alot of things mentioned in the story that I have not fully explained so i really need to clear those issues up.
now finally I have been messing with a spin off story but i have to get the Nev city timeline to line up with it before I can release it.
6 years, 11 months ago
14 Nov 2011 07:59 CET