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RainbowSnake

Erotic Fan Fiction Horror Comic Idea: give me your opinion

Theme: Code Lyoko
Title: The Tangle
Plot: xana creates a golden tentacle monster and sends it to earth. Who ever the monster mates with is put into some sort of coma after words. The Lyoko warriors must stop xana new plane before the Tangle kills them all.

The Tangle's appearance : the Tangle is a tail Golden tentacle monster with a thin torso with a six pack. It has two long skinny arms with four long shinny fingers. Its face is mostly covered by its hair like tentacles and the shadow under them but you can see its big smiling pointy teeth mouth, a long purple tongue, and its has two white rounds eyes with the Xana emblem on them. Down to the monster's keens the rest of his legs are more tentacle Its hair like tentacles reaches down to its thighs. It has a uncountable numbers of tentacles with a round tip on the end of each one of them and are very long.
With ready for the main event the Tangle pulls out a giant penis with blood veins showing, the tip of the monsters dick is a bit of a darker gold color then the color of its main body.
NOTE: the Tangles form starts out small like the size of a billiard ball. He looks more like a loose ball of  spaghetti with its skinny arms and mouth.

Powers and Ability’s : as the Tangle has sex with its victim, after it releases inside them it grows bigger.
 : the Tangles cum causes the victim to go into a hallucinated vegetable like state with no hope of awakening but there eyes stay half open.
 : can claim on walls and is very sneaky and quite when stalking its pray
 : it can blow a purple cloud at its targets that acts as a aphrodisiac
 : can camouflage but only in the dark and in water
 : in its small form its very fast, can jump high, and squeeze under door cracks.
 : in its small form, it has a penis but it hides it under its tentacles and when ready it pulls it out like a scorpion tail then grabs the victim by her thighs then attaches itself like a revers strap on.
 : can stretch out its tentacles and expand them.

Weaknesses : only attacks at night
 : sleeps during the day ( NOTE: while asleep the tower is not active)  
 : cant resists attacking half naked girls or naked girls
 : bright light brakes the camouflage    

Obligation : have sex with random girls and the two female Lyoko warriors until it gets big enough to finish off the Lyoko warriors in combat.
 
Victims in order and places : Amelia Milly Solovieff in her dorm room while she is asleep
: (NOTE her roommate Tamiya wares earphones while sleeping so she cant hear Milly being raped)
: Tamiya Diop same place right after Milly was done with.
: Elisabeth Sissi Delmas at the school pool after hours.
: Yolanda Perraudin in the nurses office after hours.
: off screen attacks
: Yumi Ishiyama in her house while her parents are out and her little brother is at a sleep over.

Monsters : Krabs, Megatanks, and Silver Tangle,

NOTE: the Silver Tangle is the same as the Gold Tangle except it has a sexy female body to seduce men, dose not grow after sex, can changes its body shape to look like any girl (example, the Silver Tangle shapes its body to look like Samantha Knight so to lure Odd into his sexy doom but dose not change its skin color) and Only found in Lyoko

Lyoko Location : the forest sector  
Viewed: 11 times
Added: 8 years, 9 months ago
 
cheftrim29
8 years, 9 months ago
not a bad idea but if i can make a suggestion how about it makes it's females victims into sex crazed maniacs wanting more sex specifically from the male lyoko warriors
RainbowSnake
8 years, 9 months ago
that's a idea. how about this then; after the tangle has sex with the females and hides to sleep during the day the victims wake up as sex crazed maniacs. the sex maniacs would be made to have sex with the males nonstop. the would screw the guys tell they die.  
I'm now thinking this would be good for a part.2 "The Tangle 2, the Walking Lust" Maybe we can both wrokshop this idea and see if bbmbbf likes it, what do you say
cheftrim29
8 years, 9 months ago
maybe i first finish the dragon mating comics then i will see, i'm not saying no it will just have to wait. great idea though, just not too keen bout the dying part
RainbowSnake
8 years, 9 months ago
thats far, i can wait tell Dragon mating is done just glade to hear your on board with this and don't worry nobody is going to die in this comic. just saying even after the guys climax the crazy girls would just keep going.
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