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ButtercupSaiyan

Bedtime Stories for Faithful Servants

T'was on Fimchan this morning doing my usual hipster artist faggotry bullshit and a troll suggested we use our time to write fics instead of bitching.

I am not saying personal army, but feel free to join in the discussion. Productively. http://fim.413chan.net/art/res/21068+50.html

This resulted. It is a TwilightxSpike lemon based on a picture by MegaSweet of humanoid Twilight petting Spike suggestively on her lap. No, it's not finished yet.

Pic here: http://i.imgur.com/f39nQ.png

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1noDuLlpxtCfPtPlqHYS...

Feel free to add or edit things for improvement.

I also get a lot of, "Wait, you write?"

Yes, I write. It's just that the veneer between my personal experiences and my art is even thinner than usual so it's really awkward for me to post that kind of thing.

Also, writing Twilight as human but keeping all pony terms and worldbuilding so as not to be confusing. Just ... think of it like she is "written" as it but it's like an art style, she's really still a pony.

>_< MFW I hate humanized ponies and just totally wrote a story with that very thing.
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Added: 7 years ago
 
PlaneshifterLair
7 years ago
Looking good so far~ I like the attitudes, to be honest :3
ButtercupSaiyan
7 years ago
So, the opposite of "And then they fucked, the end"? XP
PlaneshifterLair
7 years ago
Was damn funny picturing Twilight saying that! =P
My only complaint is a personal choice, so the story itself is damn good up to what was posted :3
ButtercupSaiyan
7 years ago
Probably the ship, right?
PlaneshifterLair
7 years ago
No, no, is more 'personal choice' than that. I'm just not fond of hemipenes on dragons =P
But as I said, my choice, not any kind of mistake XD
ScyStorm
7 years ago
Writing is fun!
ButtercupSaiyan
7 years ago
Haha, I love this comment. It's the kind of stupid comment I make when I'm like "I agree!" but I'm too sleepy to locute it.
ScyStorm
7 years ago
Haha. :3
Saglinger
7 years ago
I remember I used to have a few half-finished stories but lost them all when my hard drive got wiped..   But I've never even tried to write a lemon fic.  Or any sort of fan-fic.  The closest I've ever done to fan-fic writing is RPing Star Wars and Star Trek.
ButtercupSaiyan
7 years ago
*strokes chin*

I usually don't write fanfic either, I write original fiction and I've been published before. (Small magazines, one is currently out of print, the other one the site went down 2 years ago =( What is the world coming to?)

But I certainly can, there's nothing stopping me ... I see fanfic as the helpful stepping stone for writers to learn real writing skills without the terror of submitting their stories to an editor or a team who will then change over half of it immediately. D=
Chrysolithos
7 years ago
I love it so far. I am looking forward to reading more.
ButtercupSaiyan
7 years ago
*nods* I am working on it still.

You'd be amazed how difficult it is to write a sex scene down ... :S

My brain is screaming, "Just DRAW IT!"
humbird0
7 years ago
The advantage of writing is that things can change quickly from one action to another.
And you can describe sensations that are hard to show.
One of my favorite tricks is having something happen in a dark room, and then describe some of it through what the oblivious character is feeling.
It's easy to get too bogged down in details if you're trying to turn a picture into words.
humbird0
7 years ago
I really love that picture.
I'm a sucker for mischievous situations like that.
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